Friday 15 September 2017

My Poem - Poetry week and Peotry writing competition

This is my poem that I entered in the poetry competition in Greymouth Library. We had been learning how to craft poems last term and then we used them this term.
Moss

The moss is juicy green,
super soft.
The sad soggy moss
lying down
dark
like 100 curls ripping into the ground
Riiiiiiiipppp!
The moss is a little oval ant crawling up the green tree.


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 September 2017 at 09:39

    Hi Zac,
    Your poem sounds great! You are good at using poetic language.
    Keep up the good work!
    Emily

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  2. Aung naing22 May 2018 at 10:36

    Hi Zac
    i really like how you did a poem about moss it sound really interesting
    and you are very good at poetic language and can you please add a little about the poem. keep it up Zac.

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Thanks for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.

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