Hi Zac. My name is Jeremiah and I go to Panmure Bridge School. What an amazing DLO. It is well detailed and I liked how you talked about a variety of different types of species. Maybe next time you can write a bit more in your blurb to make sure your readers know what they are going to read and why you created this DLO for. Besides that I enjoyed learning a bit more about another thing. Did you enjoy learning about seaweed?
Hi Zac. My name is Jeremiah and I go to Panmure Bridge School. What an amazing DLO. It is well detailed and I liked how you talked about a variety of different types of species. Maybe next time you can write a bit more in your blurb to make sure your readers know what they are going to read and why you created this DLO for. Besides that I enjoyed learning a bit more about another thing. Did you enjoy learning about seaweed?
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