Monday, 20 April 2020

Cluckather gets away




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5 comments:

  1. Sue Gibson20 April 2020 at 10:57

    Hello Zac,

    It is great to see you posting your learning. Miss J told the teachers about this great story. I am keen to read your writing. Can you please check how it is looking on the blog - I cannot see all of the text.

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2020 at 12:00

      Hi Mrs Gibson

      Thanks for reading my story. Miss J fixed it up for me so hopefully you can read it now.

      from Zac

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  2. Anonymous20 April 2020 at 12:07

    What a great effort Zac!

    Every time I read this story I spot another piece of great detail I missed earlier. I really enjoyed reading it on this rainy day.
    Thanks Zac, Mrs Devlin

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  3. Anonymous23 April 2020 at 12:05

    Hi Mrs Devlin

    Thanks for your comment.
    I really enjoyed writing the story.
    I have some ideas for another story.

    from Zac

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  4. Sue Gibson23 April 2020 at 18:43

    Hello Zac,
    I am sooooo...pleased Miss J 'fixed' the text so I could read your imaginative story. What a classic ending - they were on a wild hen chase, and she was sleeping all the time.
    Keep on writing.

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Thanks for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.

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