Great writing and ideas Zac! I think you've captured some clear sensations and feelings that people who read your poem will be able to relate to. Thanks for sharing your hard work. Miss J
Hi Zac, Thanks for sending me the link to your blog so I can enjoy your wonderful writing. Your poem evokes many responses such as joy and sadness. Images are such a good way to evoke a response, simply saying you are sad or happy wouldn't work the same at all. I love the music that goes along with your poem. Well done.
Zac I LOVE this poem and it is even better with the music!
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DeleteI think it sounds better with the music as well.
Glad you enjoyed it.
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ReplyDeleteGreat writing and ideas Zac! I think you've captured some clear sensations and feelings that people who read your poem will be able to relate to.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your hard work.
Miss J
thx for commenting on my blog.
DeleteI enjoyed writing this poem.
i really like the yellow how you say that yellow sounds like bees buzzing great job :)
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DeleteI LOVE BEEEEES :D
Hi Zac, Thanks for sending me the link to your blog so I can enjoy your wonderful writing. Your poem evokes many responses such as joy and sadness. Images are such a good way to evoke a response, simply saying you are sad or happy wouldn't work the same at all. I love the music that goes along with your poem. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog.
DeleteI loved thinking about how to describe each colour.
Kia ora Zac your thing that you did is so so cool.
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