Hi Zac, I really enjoyed learning bit about yourself and your family and pets. I like your pets names too. Next time please write a bit more about yourself because people are interested to know about you. Another minor thing is that you could change the way you have chosen to present your work. A google draw might be better because it is very small. Besides that what a superb effort.
Hi Zac I really enjoyed leaning about you Zac and your family. Next time if you do another one about all about me then can you put a little bit more about you and can you tell us what's your pets name is please. your work sound interesting keep it up Zac.
Hi Zac, I really enjoyed learning bit about yourself and your family and pets. I like your pets names too. Next time please write a bit more about yourself because people are interested to know about you. Another minor thing is that you could change the way you have chosen to present your work. A google draw might be better because it is very small. Besides that what a superb effort.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed leaning about you Zac and your family. Next time if you do another one about all about me then can you put a little bit more about you and can you tell us what's your pets name is please. your work sound interesting keep it up Zac.