Hi Zac, my name is Jeremiah and I go to Panmure Bridge School. Your explanation has many great aspects. For example it explains how sound waves work. It was great to learn something new and I really enjoyed reading your explanation. Next time can I suggest that you link your paragraphs so that it gives a nice flow throughout your writing and also write a bit more in your blurb. Did you want to learn about sound waves?
I really like how you learnt about sound wave and how you can hear it.I really like how you add the pressure of the sound wave. But Zac can you add a blurb to your blog post to give us more information about the work that you did.
I really like how you learnt about sound waves form explosion and I really like how you are doing about sound waves for your witting topic. You should add a little more blurb to your blog post.
Hi Zac, my name is Jeremiah and I go to Panmure Bridge School. Your explanation has many great aspects. For example it explains how sound waves work. It was great to learn something new and I really enjoyed reading your explanation. Next time can I suggest that you link your paragraphs so that it gives a nice flow throughout your writing and also write a bit more in your blurb. Did you want to learn about sound waves?
ReplyDeleteHi Jeremiah,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. Yes I did want to learn about Soundwaves & I had fun learning about them. Next time I can add more to my blurb.
Thanks,
Zac
HI Zac
ReplyDeleteI really like how you learnt about sound wave and how you can hear it.I really like how you add the pressure of the sound wave. But Zac can you add a blurb to your blog post to give us more information about the work that you did.
Hi Aung Naing,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. Yes I can add a blurb next time.
Thanks
Zac
Hi Zac
ReplyDeleteI really like how you learnt about sound waves form explosion and I really like how you are doing about sound waves for your witting topic. You should add a little more blurb to your blog post.
Keep It Up Zac